Salut, j'ai fait cela en anglais... Pouvez vous m'aidez à corriger s'il y'a des fautes ? Je vous mets aussi la consigne Merci

Réponse :

remplace “when I heard of this burger“ par “when I heard about this burger“

quand il y a ecrit “so that, it will be...“ ecrit plutot “so that will be...“

ecrit “in order to try this burger“

met plutot my “she said“

“fond“ et pas “found“

enleve le “a“ devant “juicy meat“

“you should try it with your friends“

“we may spend a tasty moment together“

C'est soi “they cook the impossible burgers as soon as you order them“ ou “they cook the impossible burger as soon as you order it“